Monday, November 19, 2018

The Golden Eve Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time that came out after explosion of an old nebula
And diverged moving beauty all-round the vacant space
In a weak moment of love scattered all its charming wealth
But it burst in tears by losing a gorgeous grace.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 September 2022

Portrait of art... great

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Valsa George 21 November 2018

She can defeat the aging by Mona Lisa's smile on the lips She is Cleopatra born once again and will never grow old....................................... I do perfectly agree with you! A beautiful write and a great tribute to your soulmate!

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2018

Time will throw its dust on age yet the smile on face can change everything, A fantastic poem on lady love, Almighty is ever kind to all of us & blessed with some creations that stands apart, I suppose she is your better-half. Fantastic poem Janab.

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Muzahidul Reza 20 November 2018

At The Golden Eve you have done well dear poet presenting a love poem. thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Khalid Saifullah 19 November 2018

Beauty, beauty, a thing of beauty............

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Bharati Nayak 19 November 2018

The golden Eve is favored with love for her beautiful heart She can capture the Rome of time as she is made of gold, She can defeat the aging by Mona Lisa's smile on the lips She is Cleopatra born once again and will never grow old. - - - - - - Timelessness of beauty captured in the poem- - - Love never grows old. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem- - -Charm and grace scattered from the beautiful lady.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 November 2018

What a marvelous poem. A timeless lady and beauty nurtured by love. Liked the picture of your beautiful lady. So very true, she can defeat aging by her Mona Lisa smile. I concur with Kellys Kurt's great comment. Beautifully crafted write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 November 2018

The golden Eve is favored with love for her beautiful heart She can capture the Rome of time as she is made of gold, She can defeat the aging by Mona Lisa's smile on the lips She is Cleopatra born once again and will never grow old.........touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem on Eve so nicely executed.

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Kelly Kurt 19 November 2018

Her beauty shines from her smile and through your words of love and admiration.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2018

The last two lines of the last stanza speak volumes! A lovely poem... beautifully penned....10

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