The Golden Elixir Comments

The nymph from the lake no poetic nymph born after 2014 o beach girl u have never read me i compose only on girls lovely beachy but i c u don't reply any

Wonderful use of words. I did enjoy these words.

Better than I deserved to read, thank you madam!

Wonderful............................... 100000 You may like to read my poems and express your views too..... Naila

Oh thats awesome to know how fragrance can inspire you, when i read it i imagine of fantasy like a dreamy inspired and thats cool to know fragrance does magic to your pen. Personally scent always give great door to revisit past memory.. :)

As usual...very nice imagery.

The first four lines are captivating. The poem overall is very nice.

Golden poem about a golden fragrance. I like it.

well written poem..nice imagery.liked much

Beautiful imagery, an essence of mystery surrounding this poem, exuding wonder at it's meaning. An effervescent image of the past, coming out from the darkness. Excellent poem! Enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

Ok...not sure how I missed this. Great imagery...great flow! ! !

Lovely poem. Are you not writing anymore? This is your newest poem, and it's from last August. Please come back and write some more!

nere [with no apostrophe] Definitions from the GNU version of the Collaborative International Dictionary of English Were not. from The Century Dictionary and Cyclopedia A Middle English form of near. An obsolete contracted form of never. n. A Middle English form of neer. n. A Middle English contraction of ne were, were not. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Her tawny hand grasped The round amber bottle And bowing her head [............without a comma between bowing and her, OR changing some words, it almost sounds like the tawny hand was doing the inhaling.] Inhaled the mixture - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - do you find all of your fragrances on brambled banks (a nice alliteration) ? - - - - - - - - banks/lake; mixture/elixir; heart/part............... your rhyming got better as you went along. :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - i think i would rearrange the last stanza a bit, and i would always use punctuation, but i DO like the poem. thanks for sharing. bri :) add enough chocolate and i might go for it!

a well painted word image. nicely done

Lovely poem. enjoyed reading it.