The Golden Egg Comments

A beautiful poem giving moral lessons in a playful way. Thanks for sharing.10+

Very nice! real nice lfow!

Very nice! real nice lfow!

a poem of wisdom nice write

Didactic and full of wisdom.A lovely write!

A great poem... full of positive energy... and so true... if we feed up our brain with positive thoughts.. then definately the result would be positive

Another vote for the wisdom of your write.

I agree with the message and I follow it the line with humour, I even read 'Wrinkle Wrinkle Little Star' to my 96yr old mum in law.. great read...regards

Good brain food. Great practical advice for the way to a better life. But it will not work, unless we, each, take the time to sincerely put it into practice. I'm all for it Aufie.

Yes, there is so much wisdom in this poem. I am so happy to see how many people is thinking and approving this kind of positiveness.

Lovely! to think that we get so lost in darkness that surrounds us, we forget to think of a positive thing daily. We are stressed over the state of things in our lives. If we can take one positive thought, turn it into an 'egg' that produces more positive thoughts. Very nice the way it shows the spirituality in it with one simple act of a positive thought and actively look for something good to share. I do like this poem. It is sublime in the simplicity of the message.

Human brain can produce much more valuable things than a golden egg. But man should come out of his small self and look at the larger society. Surely greater things will be visible. Great poem. Marks 10+

'And sure your brain, just like the goose A golden egg a day it will produce' I really would love to try - you sound pretty convincingly!

There is so much wisdom weaved into this poem. This was truly from the Fathers Heart. An inspired poem, ; D

Let’s feed our brain with all the best Positive thoughts, lofty aims, a loving chest Let’s focus on God’s way, forget the rest Search daily for some goodness in the news And sure your brain, just like the goose A golden egg a day it will produce Great work so simple but too good... In a very simple way you have conveyed the do's and don'ts and its very true and so well you compare the brain with the golden egg..Enjoyed it very well and it deserves 10+++ Thanks for sharing.....

Even though I do not fully agree with all what is written in your poem, I agree that positive minded person can be more valuable for himself and also for his surroundings.... But positive minded not mean to being blind, to being disregardful or negligent to the others troubles, others suffering and injustice. Yes with positive mind we can overcome many troubles... but also we can in a positive way express our 'no! ' for any injustice, for things we consider for very-very wrong and dangerous! The golden egg cannot serve well when we use it only for own well being.

wonder at ur ingenuity to compare the brain with a golden egg. Now something of more incredible worth Was given to each of us at birth We ‘ve got a worthy thinking brain If positive, loving thoughts we’d feed it Yes that is really all that’s needed Just think of all the golden eggs to gain you are really advising ur children here about drugs and bad deeds etc. We can count on it, perfectly sure That we will lose our brain as golden goose Let’s feed our brain with all the best Positive thoughts, lofty aims, a loving chest Let’s focus on God’s way, goodness, fineness, love Gods way......... you are real father and a great teacher. thank you dear for sharing. your brain is really a golden egg.

It's remarkable poem! With very simple demonstration with a golden goose, you have beautifully packed the poem with what we shouldn't do, and what ought to do.Essence.....Let’s feed our brain with all the best! You are a noble soul, Hans.Vote 10+++ Thanks for inviting..