Saturday, December 16, 2017

The Golden Axe. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wood cutter boy
is with utter dismay
something precious
it must be
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Binayakumar Mohanty
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Asochya Sidhatapa 26 October 2018

Nice poem on agony Thanks for sharinh

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 December 2017

Some thing precious must he has lost, so worried plunging in to dark ness goes, He buried. A lovely composition this one. I demand the third stanza be rewritten. 10++ for it. Subhas

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 December 2017

Thanks sir you may read rewritten stanza as per your suggestion.

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