The Gold Petal Comments

Perhaps my words will not sound as eloquent as Mr.Gieske a good poet in his own right..this poem brought more than a few memories to my eye and smile...iip thanks you for your time and great efforts..again..thank you.

C'est manifique et tres beau. J'aime beaucoup, 'eccentric as the wind' and 'the Angel's arrow/ pierced our passing day. C'est tres original. Merci bien. I like the way you use nature's images and create a dreamy sensation through which the words 'eccentric, etched' and 'pierced' punch through. Very well done.