The Gods Were Illuminated Comments

There is an ocean in the sky, and it is as though the gods are illuminated in heaven ... ya that always reminds us of divine power and it s, existence, , , , ,10 lovely poem dear

dramatic. marks 10 shan

nice work samuel.. i could say that you are born to be a poet..continue to inspire people

I love this poem, somehow it brought back some of my melted memories. I give it a 10.

Nice, i really liked it

I like this, very nice finish

this is quite good, just as it should

Yeah Mann... Dis Poem Is Da Sh** lol Bringz Me Back To Thosez Dayz lolz Comment Minez! ! !

beautiful! and masterfully written I can see it all in my mind's eye, It takes me back to when I was so much younger, a similar time, a scene, thoughts just like yours. I read this poem over and over This is one of the best! 10+

i loved this poem it really made me hold on to each and every word. nice write: D

beautiful write Samuel.........words done with deep imagination and creativity.....the lines abt schools should be off tmro was lovely....many of us do paryed lke tht while we goin to school......pretty lovable....sebastine

I love all your imagination....all of it is wonderful and......there is no denying that you have talent. ♥ ♥ ♥

Samuel i like it! ! ! you have a big imagination that i admire about you in your poem! ! ! ! !

I envy you. I live in Philly. No snow. Ah, the solitude of the white. Keep it real. JRP

a 10 no questions asked!

I think it is amazing how you worded this :)

Very self reflective. I think you will find that embedding descriptive words into your head will help you become more self reflective. I'm still looking through dictionaries for those right words.

I really like that poem. Go and do yo thing!

I really love yr thought, you can dive through the bottom of yr imagination & make it exclusively wonderful. I wish i knew you earlier on yr childhood. Tks for sharing

Damn this poem is sooo good! but i find the last stanza doesn't really fit with the rest. You sound like a lonley kid, and then its something about heaven and gods. Anyways, keep 'em coming! oh and don't you make it rhyme, please don't