Monday, December 15, 2008

The Gods Were Illuminated Comments

Rating: 4.6

I walk into my room,
the door shuts behind me.
I am in my own world
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Samuel Stuart Pennell
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There is an ocean in the sky, and it is as though the gods are illuminated in heaven ... ya that always reminds us of divine power and it s, existence, , , , ,10 lovely poem dear

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dramatic. marks 10 shan

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Joebert Penalba 19 April 2010

nice work samuel.. i could say that you are born to be a poet..continue to inspire people

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Sipokoyto Lim 08 April 2009

I love this poem, somehow it brought back some of my melted memories. I give it a 10.

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Jose Elias 29 January 2009

Nice, i really liked it

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Morgan Bodden 24 January 2009

I like this, very nice finish

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Louis Rams 23 January 2009

this is quite good, just as it should

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MuRdA RhEE 16 January 2009

Yeah Mann... Dis Poem Is Da Sh** lol Bringz Me Back To Thosez Dayz lolz Comment Minez! ! !

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the cemetery man 16 January 2009

beautiful! and masterfully written I can see it all in my mind's eye, It takes me back to when I was so much younger, a similar time, a scene, thoughts just like yours. I read this poem over and over This is one of the best! 10+

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<font color =fusha>Amy 16 January 2009

i loved this poem it really made me hold on to each and every word. nice write: D

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 January 2009

beautiful write Samuel.........words done with deep imagination and creativity.....the lines abt schools should be off tmro was lovely....many of us do paryed lke tht while we goin to school......pretty lovable....sebastine

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Cory Jensen 13 January 2009

I love all your imagination....all of it is wonderful and......there is no denying that you have talent. ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sheri Barrett 09 January 2009

Samuel i like it! ! ! you have a big imagination that i admire about you in your poem! ! ! ! !

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Joe Russell 09 January 2009

I envy you. I live in Philly. No snow. Ah, the solitude of the white. Keep it real. JRP

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Jose Murguia 09 January 2009

a 10 no questions asked!

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Arik Carpenter 08 January 2009

I think it is amazing how you worded this :)

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Mike Matsuda 07 January 2009

Very self reflective. I think you will find that embedding descriptive words into your head will help you become more self reflective. I'm still looking through dictionaries for those right words.

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Wykeshia Mccallister 05 January 2009

I really like that poem. Go and do yo thing!

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 04 January 2009

I really love yr thought, you can dive through the bottom of yr imagination & make it exclusively wonderful. I wish i knew you earlier on yr childhood. Tks for sharing

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Rita Shay 04 January 2009

Damn this poem is sooo good! but i find the last stanza doesn't really fit with the rest. You sound like a lonley kid, and then its something about heaven and gods. Anyways, keep 'em coming! oh and don't you make it rhyme, please don't

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