Tuesday, October 14, 2008

The Godforsaken Atmosphere When Autumn Falls Comments

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The decaying leaves decamp from the flamboyant trees regrettably
And a virtuous traveler heard an old crow crowed on an isolated lamp post.
'Hey! Brother are you in a dilemma? '
The wanderer is familiar with the bird's dialect and he replies;
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Alison Cassidy 18 October 2008

You use irony to great dramatic and comedic effect in this cautionary tale about life and employment and the changing seasons. Autumn is indeed the time of letting go and your crow carries wit and wisdom in his beak. Another fine poem from your fertile pen. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 14 October 2008

Very touching. I have always felt that crows are very wise and know the secret of survival. Wishing you a brighter tomorrow. And may autumn be kind to you. Warm regards, Sandra

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