Sunday, August 21, 2016

The Goddess Of Perseverance Comments

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In the night the moon begins to shine brightly
As Stars begins to shine The wind's calm as
A summer chill a basket of darkness fills the
Air but her eyes are wide awake not a blink
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Laquory Jones
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2018

Her eyes are wide awake! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 01 September 2016

A very insightful and philosophic poem, Laquory. The punctuation, outline and some grammar needs work, but the thoughts are there.

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