Tuesday, December 16, 2008

The Goddess Kayquine Comments

Rating: 5.0

The darkness I search for in this falling night.
Summoning the courage for your devils delight.
Haunted, I walk alone, into the depths of reigned desire.
Upon your touch, death, my ravaged body thrown to the pire.
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Brad Kellum
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Atsiylah Garfinkel 16 December 2008

Now this poem, is real! I love it. You have expressed emotion with fantastic imagery and an underlaying tone of a taboo passion for the piece. It is perfect.

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Samuel Pennell 16 December 2008

Wow, I love it, it has a vampire feel to it, like Bram Stoker. I love the lines 'my wonderful sin' and 'even if it means tearing my soul apart' yes, very vampire-esque indeed! i love it. please check out my poems Samuel Stuart Pennell

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