Thursday, June 26, 2014

The Goddess Awakes Comments

Rating: 5.0

APRIL is a goddess slowly
awakening in a spacious garden.
Her eyes, like mine, burn
in the new sunshine. Like mine,
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Daniel Brick
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 20 December 2015

The beginning of Spring. Nicely written.

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Valsa George 24 August 2014

I see here the scene of a beautiful transition from the blighting winter to the sunny April! With the advent of spring the misty air gives way to bright sunshine and Nature is clothed in dazzling apparel! Every where life burgeons! This dramatic change from barren Earth to a colourful Earth with new sprouts of life is beautifully presented through a single image of April the great artist mixing the shades in her palette from yellow to pale green and from pale green to sapphire green! This bright Spring scene is pleasant like the early beams of a bright dawn!

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* Sunprincess * 26 June 2014

.........some great poets are born in april like william shakespeare.....and april is one of my favourite months....so nicely you penned this beautiful tribute....

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