Much like any other God
most people
never saw him coming.
Yet when he spoke
...
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I love the story line like flow of this poem. Very well done. Paddy sounds like an older self-made local resident preacher found at interesections shouting. But this one you speak of prefers cycling around? If thats right, cool. If not, poem is still cool.
Again one of your lovely 'characters' expressed so well, that one can form a picture of him, this Paddy! Loved it, it held my attention the whole way through. Love Ernestine XXX