Friday, February 24, 2006

The Goblin Comments

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Goblin, goblin, burning white
in what hell are you tonight?
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Martin A. Ramos
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Hugh Cobb 24 February 2006

Martin - It's nice to see you back on the site. Good write, couple of typo's but that's obviously what they are, no biggie. Fine use of rhyme & meter. It's almost like a pagan chant. Kind regards, Hugh

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Graham Jones 24 February 2006

Sounds like a nasty little chap this one, enjoyed this very much good rhyming flow and content, welldone.

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Martin A. Ramos

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