Grace unequalled in my earthly eyes,
dream when snuffles into ocean blue,
dust inflames, as fire stashes in the hide
across the mystery of the jingle’s brim.
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An interesting and good write. I have enjoy reading it.
aha-- at last I see the shades of the vibrant green. 'warmth cradles the glow of the green' nice write +++10 regards anjali
Really, such a beauty within your write. I also feel that if you leave the poem with less articles of speech, your work would be even more enticing and succulent in its grasp. arya.
poem is so clean and green, with words flowing like river, ....
Awesome! ! ! ! The imagery are very nice, the flow and used of words are very interesting.10+++++++ for this. best regards, joan d.h.
Yet another capturing read Dr.Kar! Elegant wording, delightfully expressive! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad
a visual metaphor: ''voices when curves the shape of grin'' of a wonderful descriptive poem of color...well written..10++