Sunday, August 24, 2008

! ! ! The Glow Of The Green! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.9

Grace unequalled in my earthly eyes,
dream when snuffles into ocean blue,
dust inflames, as fire stashes in the hide
across the mystery of the jingle’s brim.
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Dr subhendu kar
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Marieta Maglas 18 June 2009

a visual metaphor: ''voices when curves the shape of grin'' of a wonderful descriptive poem of color...well written..10++

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 31 August 2008

An interesting and good write. I have enjoy reading it.

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Anjali Sinha 31 August 2008

aha-- at last I see the shades of the vibrant green. 'warmth cradles the glow of the green' nice write +++10 regards anjali

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

...a compact and amazing expression indeed..........10+

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, aryaindia 29 August 2008

Really, such a beauty within your write. I also feel that if you leave the poem with less articles of speech, your work would be even more enticing and succulent in its grasp. arya.

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Shalini Kts 26 August 2008

poem is so clean and green, with words flowing like river, ....

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Awesome! ! ! ! The imagery are very nice, the flow and used of words are very interesting.10+++++++ for this. best regards, joan d.h.

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Thad Wilk 24 August 2008

Yet another capturing read Dr.Kar! Elegant wording, delightfully expressive! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad

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