I shall wait for that day
till the last ray of the sun,
when I rise at the peak
and be next to none..
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dear vaibhav......your poem shows, both spirit and ambition.young man i am happy, that you have a goal, and you want to show the world! great poem, lved reading it.best wishes. ritty
I can sense my time is coming and it is smelling just so fine. Hide your faces, you doubters! ! The glory shall be mine... i love this..a nice message
your poem finds heart in every readers....wonderful and beautiful indeed...thank you and God bless.......
hey....wonderful. thanks man! i needed to read this one...thank you very much.
Hopefully one day you can realize this glory. Keep writing, Vaibhav. Your poems will captivate everyone in the years to come.
you stand tall with this lovely powerful write.... you stand with God........
when a person refuses to rise, then the battle is already lost. great write and poetically put.
It is refreshing to see that confidence of youth expressed so clearly in this fine poem, Vaibhav. Of course, it does not take in the harsh realities of life, where dreams do not come true nor are all hopes realized. However, I liked this poem, it's challenge almost carelessly thrown at the world as the young are wont to do. Glory is a nice but fleeting thing, but I hope you do attain your piece of it! Carl.
I am not quite sure what war the writer is referring to, but the poem itself is masterful in its presentation to the reader. It is so good, in fact, I doubt if the readers of this will care which war he is referring to. The only important part here is the execution of this poem. It is so good, as to be magnificent. GW62
Vaibhav, a very well penned poem. I love positive attitude in life. Thanks for sharing. CP
very great piece...inspiring...very poetic words are strong and fine flowing... full of confidence and trust in yourself.... a very positive outlook on own eternal glory.... a very wonderful share, my friend 10++++
This superb confidence is wonderful. You will surely reach where you want.
You have an amazing talent and I believe the glory you tell about shall be yours, Vaibhav. God bless. Y.M.