Sunday, December 30, 2012

The Global Touch Comments

Rating: 4.8

The end of another years performance,
The fluttering of leaves waltzing
In a cold easterly breeze,
Flowers of the forest, hiding their beauty
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Lajpat Chawla 30 April 2015

Rainbows bringing rich, deep colour, To our sometimes black and white world, great job.

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Shahzia Batool 09 January 2013

the last stanza is powerful part of a lovely poem...wishing you the same...happy new year...

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Maria C. Pires Costa 05 January 2013

Starting from the title, and going alongside the flow of your expressively heartfelt messages, this is truly a touch of tenderness aimed at the world! Love it! Wishing you a very Happy New Year! Maria

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Mukesh Parmar 01 January 2013

great words and awesome poem.. even it reminds my poem Into The Wild which is almost the same like yours

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Saadat Tahir 31 December 2012

lovely charming descriptive... enjoyed

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Vishal Sharma 31 December 2012

very nice poem.....too touchy..for me TO read

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Kishor Pathak 30 December 2012

Wow! Simply superb. wonderful expression of feelings. You made my day with magnetic words. I was in dreams bidding adieu to my past earned memories...

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

happy new year... wish you...nice poem.... great passionate....

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Xelam Kan™ 30 December 2012

ya wish so, , , , , , , , , crafted with great devotion, few images are fabulous....... tnx for sharing such sweet fancies

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Vikrant Jog 30 December 2012

Happy new year... Good... Lied the optimistic approach

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Jahan Zeb 30 December 2012

A very Happy new near to you Hazel. I wish I could play with words like you. Love to see the swings in your tone. Very Nice flow to your poem. Loved you selection of words.

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Valerie Dohren 30 December 2012

A lovely poem Hazel - a very Happy New Year to you also, and please keep gracing us with your wonderful poetry through 2013: -) {{{hugs}}}

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