Enfold my body in loving arms
As we step into our spirit dance
Caress my skin with sweet adoration
Trace a pattern upon my naked soul
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Perfection from beginning to end- a captivating read Fi, each line a poem in itself. You never fail to step higher up your ladder of excellence, giving pure pleasure
This very beautiful and passionate poem is you at your very best, Fi, as your phrasing in this tremendous write is simply exquisite. You made this scene so vivid with your words that I couldn't help feeling I was the one with you staring into your eyes! Carl.
Together in arms of love you hold the passion that speaks from the eyes.. 'As we step into our Spirit dance'...wonderful phraseology... Sue x
Find out Fiona.. You never know you could well be fascinated by the dazzling glitter that sparkles like crazy......... xxx