The Gleam: Comments

** Thraldom is a noun that means the state of being under the control of another person, or the state of being in slavery or bondage: ....more from me later?

Reading from line 4 to line 5 is 'bumpy' for me, and your meaning is unclear to me.. : ( And I think I've never heard, read, nor spoken the word THRALDOM **. (cont.)

Well, that comment seemed to be accepted by PH! ! So, I shall continue reading and commenting. The 'corner' serves as an asylum? OK.

I'm having serious trouble leaving more comments. If you remind me to try again, I may do so another day. : (

Shraddhanand...[ yes, I copied and pasted your name : ) ] I like the title. My mom used to (60 years ago) encourage me to enlarge my English/American vocabulary, but I resisted. (cont.)

I appreciate 'Poet's Notes'. I suggest 'highlights'. And I have a few other suggestions, but I understand it all. bri : ) Now to read the poem i.e. 'I will now read the poem.'

I like your biography: 'I'm lecturer in English. I love reading and writing poems. I firmly believe in doing good to the people around me.' I'd put 'a' before lecturer; I think it is a typo.