Saturday, February 13, 2010

The Glass Of Wine Smiles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two glasses of wine
Waiting, on a bare wooden table.
Breathing the air.
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Rani Turton
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Kesav Easwaran 26 February 2010

lines very much expressive...a silent picture of the joy of the 'wine' inside...10

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C. P. Sharma 19 February 2010

I loved the touch of Persian poetry in it. CP

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Amy Marie 13 February 2010

I like the part about the wine... it really fills my senses ;) Nice work ;)

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Amy Marie 13 February 2010

Nice! The part about the wine fills my senses ;)

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Amy Marie 13 February 2010

Nice! The part about the wine fills my senses ;)

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Vance Gilmore 13 February 2010

Rani, this little gem is fantastic! You have truly put wine in it's proper context. Thank you.

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