Saturday, April 25, 2009

The Girl With Wondrous Glow Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found her there in springtime.
A wondrous time, you know.
My love in all her gloried form
With such a wondrous glow.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Ency Bearis 07 May 2009

an awesome poem...nice flow to read...and how wonderful you descibed the girl became a wondrous flower after demise...very nice...10

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Naidz Ladia 06 May 2009

the lord of rhymes...rhyming words are nice to read..very very beautiful...naizz

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Pranav Kumar 03 May 2009

A very beautiful poem...wonderfully rhymed and full of emotions. Indeed very nice! 10+++

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definitely in the greats. sir... beautiful.. just!

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 26 April 2009

As one has come to expect a deep sentiment etched between lines of romantically written poetry that naturally flows.

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No doubt about it Greenwolfe your rhyme and lyrics work well as I comfortably take in each word. I don't have to sit and ponder on a statement I can't understand, but just love to romp down to a final stanza full of flowers and beauty as I do here. Timeless beautiful words to dwell the reader's hearts. Karin Anderson

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Tsira Goge 26 April 2009

Besides that, poems in a fantastic way sounds, I can will add, me has amazed such thin feeling and eternal the spring fire of every flower, in soul... of Green wolf... Sincerely, Tsira

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Duh Huh 25 April 2009

Even in death, life goes on. There's a loving warmth to this poem. Thank you for sharing. :)

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Cristy Upshaw 25 April 2009

You expressed a most stunning love and wonderment. Smiling til she died, then tears fell. sure enough flowers bloom to celebrate her wonderful presence. Magnificent work.

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Sandra Martyres 25 April 2009

A beautiful poem - a great blend of happiness in remembering the Girl with the wondrous glow in the beauty of the spring flowers inspite of her untimely death 10

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though she is dead you bring her back in the beauty you see..in the flower...a lovely poem

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Laurie Hill 25 April 2009

A beautiful wistful write and a wonderful read.......10

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