I found her there in springtime.
A wondrous time, you know.
My love in all her gloried form
With such a wondrous glow.
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the lord of rhymes...rhyming words are nice to read..very very beautiful...naizz
A very beautiful poem...wonderfully rhymed and full of emotions. Indeed very nice! 10+++
definitely in the greats. sir... beautiful.. just!
As one has come to expect a deep sentiment etched between lines of romantically written poetry that naturally flows.
No doubt about it Greenwolfe your rhyme and lyrics work well as I comfortably take in each word. I don't have to sit and ponder on a statement I can't understand, but just love to romp down to a final stanza full of flowers and beauty as I do here. Timeless beautiful words to dwell the reader's hearts. Karin Anderson
Besides that, poems in a fantastic way sounds, I can will add, me has amazed such thin feeling and eternal the spring fire of every flower, in soul... of Green wolf... Sincerely, Tsira
Even in death, life goes on. There's a loving warmth to this poem. Thank you for sharing. :)
You expressed a most stunning love and wonderment. Smiling til she died, then tears fell. sure enough flowers bloom to celebrate her wonderful presence. Magnificent work.
A beautiful poem - a great blend of happiness in remembering the Girl with the wondrous glow in the beauty of the spring flowers inspite of her untimely death 10
though she is dead you bring her back in the beauty you see..in the flower...a lovely poem
an awesome poem...nice flow to read...and how wonderful you descibed the girl became a wondrous flower after demise...very nice...10