Wednesday, May 22, 2019

The Girl With A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 3.7

A heart filled with pain, deceived by lies.
Feelings bitter and hard; hatred burning.
A flood of tears, giving her all red eyes.
Will the tide ever be turning?
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Aufie Zophy
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Aniruddha Pathak 05 June 2019

Truly the cure for a broken heart begins when the forgiveness will start. Whoever decides to keep hatred so strong will continue to hurt and be bitter all along.... Beautiful, well said. Really hatred is like venom.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 May 2019

A well crafted poem, sir Aufie.......10+++++++++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 May 2019

great poem, excellent connotation like to quote last couplet- Hatred is like venom that prohibits one to live; the antidote is to find it in our heart to forgive

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