The Girl Who Used To.. Comments

i shall now borrow this to place with others in my August 2017 showcase of poems of and by PH poets. Thanks. bri :)

i already wrote a lengthy comment but it seems to have disappeared! i have sent both versions (which seem the same to me) of this poem to MyPoemList. i found this to be very, very well written (my humble opinion) . but there are a couple of questions i have for the author. i read the poet's page and bio. how old REALLY is the poet? ARE there metaphors in the poem? thanks for sharing.

boys don't like sad girls that's something you should know Really? I guess it's mostly not true. The girl who used to be the best now pretends like she's the best Because she feels like the worst did you know she was depressed? She will overcome. She will be the best again!

Yes, depression take you to the bottom of life....Good write...I loved it.