Tuesday, January 22, 2008

The Girl Who Didn'T Mind Comments

Rating: 3.6

Her grip was firm, her muscles taut,
As she held onto the chain.
I tried to look the other way,
As I stood in the lane.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

this is truly amazing. what terrific imagery, oh how fun.

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James Timothy Jarrett 04 January 2009

I don't know how I missed this gem. Great poem.

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O that sweet innocense of childhood.Another ten-it's really hard to pick between the two poems.

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Thad Wilk 21 September 2008

Hi Wolfe! This poem is delightfully captivating! Wish i could give it a - 'higher rating'! ! Best regards! ! * 10plus*! Friend Thad

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When they are lost in dreams of love, Don't you dare even think of removing this beautiful work- truly a deja vu for all the boys aroha, r

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Picture perfect image in my mind of what you described here in the poetry piece. I could see everything as though I was seeing it through your eyes. Lovely read.

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Katherine Sessor 27 August 2008

As the people below my comment said, this poem has great descriptions and imagery. But honestly i'm a tad confused, when you say lay the rose across her folded arms, do you mean she has passed away? Also do you mean that the girl didn't mind to have her beauty adored when you say she didn't mind? Rather then those questions you have a pretty good poem. Kat, =)

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angelianne 1012 27 August 2008

very well written..as usual...very impressive indeed! ! ...10+...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 August 2008

The sequencetial description is soo amazing that I became highly impressed! Howcome I give 10? !

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Lee Crowell 10 August 2008

should i be ashamed to say this is my favorite of your poems? no, i say it without shame, nice work greenwolfe

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Ron Dragano 28 July 2008

IMO of course, I think it needs editing and work, a dash of some vibrant and original metaphors to knock it a notch above Noman Rockwell imagery -not that there's anything wrong with Norman or his work. But because it's less polished at this point than the other in the game- I'd vote this good bye for now.

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Kyle Shield Laster 21 July 2008

really pleasant.

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ANONYMOUS DUCK 23 June 2008

THiS a ReaLLY GooD PoeM. I LiKe iT.

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Tsira Goge 19 June 2008

Wolfey, This poems has read first time, I am admired. 10x10 Tsira

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Delwen Doyle 11 May 2008

Another great poem. I particularly enjoyed: She sang a gentle song of joy, As girls will sometimes do; When they are lost in dreams of love, Of boys they never knew.

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Darla Watkins 16 March 2008

Very well written! As always!

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Jeannie Ann Clark 04 February 2008

Very good poem from a writer who knows what he is doing! Keep writing and thank you.

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