no emotions, no heart
no sunshine, no dark
no pain, no shy
the girl who cant cry
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I can so relate to this poem (read my poem: Numb..) I love this poem so much.. I just wonder if its real or made up.. Cause I noticed some time ago when I had a period of several months were I could not write new poems that I had trouble using mine emotions to write.. And I realised I've became numb.. since then I have much trouble writing.. hope that's not your case..
i think it ends just perfectly like it is. its amazing. really it is, because there IS a girl who cant cry. matter of fact a majority of them. wonderful down to earth poem.
I like it. I personally would get rid of to be finished but I like the tone and theme (:
A good poem. I like it. :)