Monday, December 17, 2007

The Girl That Could'Ve Changed The World Comments

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This is a story about a girl
Who had the power to change the world
Brilliant body, spirit, and mind
Full of faith, always kind
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Hannah McGill
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Beth L Adams 27 December 2007

Hannah, this poem is so moving! There are so many times I've seen people who have a multitude of possibilities but lack the self-assurance to make their dreams a reality. I feel I also have this problem to some degree, so as I was reading this poem, I found comfort in your ability to put it into perspective. Very beautifully written! Take care, Beth

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Olivia Anne 20 December 2007

Amazing poem. Its very touching. Thankyou: ]

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