Wednesday, September 30, 2015

The Girl On The Street (Late September In Manhattan) Comments

Rating: 4.5

She walked by so quickly
Her beauty touched only like a whisper
About twenty or so
Impossibly lithe, lovely, and slender
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Eugene Levich
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Michael Walker 17 July 2019

A beautiful girl, beautiful place. Manhattan is the ultimate.

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Thank you for your kind comment!

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2016

PUTTING THIS INTO November's showcase, Section B, may turn a few heads. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2015

Mama mia! Ora mi scusi ma. i have to use the bagno. funny! when i toured Italy, i had a date one night. as we were about to make love, she whispered in my ear; ' me “Piccoli ma sinceri”. that was all it took: sincerity! bri :) this will be in MyPoemList and in my/our October a showcase for PH poets on my PH site. bravo.

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