Tuesday, October 24, 2017

'The Girl On The Last Bench' Comments

Rating: 4.5

I lost my sense, everything became abeyance
When I saw a girl, beside me, on the last bench

Suddenly it's changed, minor became main
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Ravi The Love Poet
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Ravi T. L. P. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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