Sunday, October 25, 2015

The Girl In The Red Hat Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cool wind blew around her deep, dark eyes,
Bringing with it, the scent of Autumn in the air,
Adorned with bewitched minds and quiet sighs,
The beauty of the Himalayas, seeking a maiden fair.
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TANIYA KUNDU
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Anil Kumar Panda 25 October 2015

Beautiful poetry. Flow and rhyming is so sweet. Keep inking.

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Taniya Kundu 25 October 2015

Thank you so much for your kind words, Sir, I am glad you like it.. :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 October 2015

Believe and you will find but a saying says search and you will find. Anyway, a marvelous poem with rhyme as well as basic philosophical queries. Enjoyed reading the poem and the wonderful description of nature. Thanks for sharing.10+++

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Taniya Kundu 25 October 2015

Thank you very much. I am glad you like my poem. Yes the Matthews 7: 7 says, Ask, and it shall be given you; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened unto you. I meant believe in the workings of the universe, and the designs shall be revealed for the person to understand, fathom. Also the underlying theme is about how little and inconspicuous we are in the grand scheme of things, among the vastness of nature.. :)

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