The Girl In The Mirror Comments

She's the girl in the mirror The girl in the glass She wants to get out But all she does is put on a pout She taps on the glass Hoping someone will pass She's sick of waiting And sick of baiting She's the girl in the mirror The girl in the glass well written and intersting..yes he miror has this effect to show the truth as you expressed here in a professional way and the way you did this poem is heartfelt..well done..

Love what your saying. But you cnat just wait for someone to come help you, you have to go out there and help yourself before anyone will be willing to help you. :) Keep writing.

very cool idea... great job. ~CM~

really good! i really like it!

Another great piece of work, i also could relate to this one as im sure so many could, keep em comming girl! ! ! !

wow great poem, i can so relate! thanks keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

Shouting in anger at the passing of lives but none understand what you are feeling inside good write thank you very much.10++++++ Keep your head up.

This descibes a lot of us Lillie. 'Let me out' is the silent scream no one hears from the girl in mirror, the girl in the glass. But we must strive to last though so that maybe one day some one passing by will free the girl in the mirror, the girl in the glass. A wonderful ethereal write and all too often true for some of us. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara