Friday, November 20, 2015

The Girl In The Dark Comments

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She sat in her room,
Surrounded by dark.
Her face shadowed with gloom
And a crack in her heart.
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Christina Bird
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 December 2015

She'll work hard to exceed, She'll give a good fight. But maybe all that she needs Is for someone to turn on the light. a great positive stroke that you yourself find here in this poem is consoling.. dont think you are in the dark. after every night there is a beautiful dawn. thank you. tony

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Christina Bird 18 January 2016

Very true Tony, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my work.

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Kelly Kurt 22 November 2015

Writing is a great way to purge your feelings and express yourself. Keep it up.

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Christina Bird 23 November 2015

I agree Kelly and thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed my work.

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Souren Mondal 20 November 2015

A very well crafted poem on depression and lonliness Christina.. Frankly, a wonderful one... Living with depression is like living perpetually alone in a dark room... Thank you for sharing..

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Christina Bird 22 November 2015

Thank you for your comment, Souren. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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