Saturday, June 2, 2012

The Girl In My Heart Comments

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Thou art good, has black hair,
Lips're rosy and skin fair,
Confidence resides inside of thee,
In short, you are the source of my glee,
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Farah Ilyas 13 June 2012

so romantic poem, combination of words along with u used archaic words thats made your poem more effective & impressing...nice 1

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Amy Marie 06 June 2012

Very descriptive and romantic :)

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2012

Wonderful poem, nice portrait, she must be a wonderful girl.M.

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Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

Bahraich, India
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