Wednesday, October 18, 2017

The Girl In A Yellow Dress Comments

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I saw you yesterday in a yellow summer dress,
the color of high dosage diazepam, through the
rain streaked window of a familiar bar, as I walked by,
somewhere in the city,
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 February 2019

When I was as young then as u r now or were then I composed a poem The Girl in a White Dress She never came into my life...you must know it....but made me a romantic poet all by now know it Then my mom passed away and I composed MOM'S SMILES as I recall her...I see my moms'eyes MAY I request you all to read it at times we wonder do all girls become such lovely MOMS

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Sister Frances 19 October 2017

I love this narrative its so heartfelt...like you left this poem at the bar for her when you left...lets hope she reads it and you get that call the very next day :)

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Tony Walton 19 October 2017

thanks Hannah. She's likely on Tinder now, I'll look there...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2017

Yellow summer dress attracted attention. Amazingly drafted poem is shared.10

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