The Girl Had A Dream Comments
The girl had a dream,
A mundane, commonplace dream.
A dream to jointly build a nest
And live with someone quietly possessed.
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This is perhaps the first time you have commented on any of my poems, welcome to my page, @Dipak Adhya! I am inspired by your appreciation of the poem.
Delicate images created by the heart and mind of a young girl when she would be a wife and then a mother and have her own kids to be brought up with care and love. And this would be in sharp contrast to what she has been through all the travails she suffered at her parents home. Thanks for sharing. Someone, who wouldn't find her faults, Or show his red eyes, or scold.
Thanks for bringing out the summary of my poem here, dear poet Rajnish. Much appreciate your thoughtful analysis.
How very touching and sweet, Like cool ocean water, Calming Life's heat. Loved it! 10+
'Like cool ocean water, Calming Life's heat' - oh that's so poetic! Loved your comment, Sandra, and many thanks for that.
Really lovely poem about the effect childhood experience can have. Well done beautifully written
Many thanks for your feedback, @Noreen Carden. Greatly appreciate your thoughtful comment.
@Kenneth Maswabi, Thank you very much for reading and appreciating my poem. I am inspired by your kind words.
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Loved the character potroyal of a peace loving girl.