The night I met you
For the very first time,
I felt bewitched
By your beautiful wide-smile
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Quite a fantasy, I enjoyed this very much. Keep up the good work!
A romantic and challenging write to express and control emotionally what you experienced. Perfectly delivered.
Lovely poem Sir. Your feelings are clear yet hidden in the poem.
Wow! indeed a great job Sir, i could just see it happening right before my eyes..loved it.. :)
Wow! Very nice job Sir.From concrete to abstract.Simply beautiful..I should follow the wise man.10++++
As an African, I have spent some of my time reading American poetry. I find comfort with the likes of Walt Whiteman, Ellynor Willy, Carl Sandberge and the rest. But Sir, I must confess, you are another execelent poet with the qualities of these gone poets. You are great sir! ...Oladehinde Joseph Ibikunle (Nigeria)
A beautiful poem, a lovely memory to stay with you, The girl from Boston Road, she touched your heart and flitted away.
How beautiful Romeo and touching. Love never dies does it? You are sweethearted too. Take care
Romantic, Eloquent & vintage Romeo....and of course this be Boston Post Rd, Bronx, N.Y., YES? lol! ~FjR~
you know actually describe love. Be brief, be eternal. Very moves!