Friday, June 23, 2006
The Girl Couldn'T Speak For Love Comments
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It’s lodged in my throat
Like a bullet sticks to muscle
And makes a heart bleed
And makes a mind remote
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Lindsay Elise
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7/29/2025 2:50:38 AM # 1.0.0
I like the way you describe - repeating some line structures, while augmenting the meaning, using contradiction, and building emphasis again - it's like a river gathering momentum from the mountains, until it breaks loose... it's a beautiful poem with a sense of craft! I would re-examine the the last four lines if I were you... have a great time writing, Lind!