Monday, August 3, 2009

The Girl Beside The Stream Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a merry little place
I used to know
It is where the sun show's it's face
And it is where the bruised go
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vittal vandavasu
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 August 2009

very good and fine poem!

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Sandra Fowler 12 August 2009

A beautiful, poignant story penned by a gifted soul. Write on, by all means. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 August 2009

Your words play is outstanding and the girl comes alive.Lovely!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 August 2009

a very natural poet you are...lovely picture..music and a story in this poem...write more...10

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Saadat Tahir 03 August 2009

very vivid and flowery good poetry...mate cheers

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Chitra - 03 August 2009

The seasons and their essence, and this connection with life and its ups and downs well protrayed through the girl beside the stream.

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