.the Girl At The Window Comments

Yuri-you come up with some astonishing imagery as in the last stanza here with 'the window a gaping mouth/ emitting a silent/ scream into the/ night' and being sucked in a black heart in another poem. The skin you leave in these poems is real, is felt, is alive. Good work. John

'She does not look real... her life is one-dimensional her world is flat and square within the frame of the window - ' Wonderful imagery!