The Girl At The Glass Window. Comments

Wow.. Love the imagination of this poem! Well done; D

good poem dude, nice twist, well done

It makes me think of desperately wanting something only to be disillusioned and disappointed by its artificiality when we understand it better. I think we've all been there, whether in relationships or in pursuit of the material aspects of life.

nice i like the ending. Cool little twist.

Wow, i love this poem