Sunday, September 6, 2015

The Girl At The Counter Comments

Rating: 5.0

The girl at the counter,
in her early twenties,
a smiling face,
the dreaming eyes,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bisma Mirza 08 September 2015

Amazing One! ! ! ! bravo! 10 on 10........................

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 September 2015

An interesting with a nice message.....................10

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Ramesh T A 06 September 2015

Fantasizing at the old age is a pleasure one can enjoy at anytime to overcome the sense of old age!

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Valsa George 06 September 2015

A very interesting encounter with a beautiful young girl! Your hilarious approach and mischievous talks must have entertained the girl much! This is the advantage of growing older.... we feel free to crack jokes and blurt out our thoughts without inhibition! Greatly enjoyed!

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Kelly Kurt 06 September 2015

Beauty is truly on the inside. I hope all girls, cute or homely, find and appreciate that. Wisely penned and with entertaining words. Thanks

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