The Girl At The Bus Stop Comments

There was the disconnect in the poem, and the last lines summed it all up. Loved your style! Preets

Your absence haunts me. Indeed. Seeing absence and hearing silence. poetry is not a language; it is a meta-language. A very fine work.

This is an excellent poem! I have seen plenty of those girls. After seeing them disappear, all you do is dream. Very well done, Sonny! A ten.

those moments when they happen stay watering the thirsty soul for years while decades flash by in a blur a wonderful poem