The Girl Comments

just read and commented on ur poem nd gave u a big 10. if you hve time would u read my poem I am your baby mum. it is about abortion. i just want to spread the idea. thank u very much God bless u

So tell me how can I Make you understand I only need you, Darling To take my hand! love, romance, expectations, desire. to get back to the one who loves and loved. nicely penned poem. thank you

i liked THE AMERICAN GAL IN NY WERE U there great poem here

Julie, very nice poem. Looking forward to more of your poetry. A definite 10.

They are the ones who begin to understand what life is really about, those people who ask questions. As you grow older and wiser your questions change. Never stop asking questions, though, never satisfy yourself with what is happening on the surface. Your life will be deeper than those who just ride along on the surface, your poetry will be more meaningful than the foolish ocean of noise surrounding you. Keep asking!

Hmm, I like reading young poet's like you. I learn few things new, the contemporary thinking, Zeals, attitudes, likes and dislikes. Well, enjoyed reading this.

when I was in NEW YORK on the 88th Floor I saw a lonely miss smiling gok at who was she you lovely poetry kid u do

Julie, wonderful poem, I. Love ryhthm of this, If I might suggest one small thing? If you change the second line in the last stanza to a stronger rhyme I think it would really enhance the ending. Maybe something like Feel full of doubt. I look forward to reading more. Keep writing

Nice work! still learning along the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

Being a girl is something normal, but being a talented poet who can plant these words in poetry land nowadays is not. Keep up, Well written.

Just a girl, maybe, but a fine poet too. Thanks, Julie