Saturday, June 6, 2009

The Girl Comments

Rating: 3.5

She knows everyones troubles
and worries in the world.
She carries this burden of
knowledge everywhere she goes.
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Tracey Owens
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this is good.. um, trace, who is this girl? ? ? ? ?

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rago rago 06 June 2009

just the girl with full of burdens.........relieve her let she enjoy the life....... yu have penned beautifully..........

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James Mclain 06 June 2009

You burden is shared, this you know as well, you have a grace about your words that make them pure...iip

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Linda Weischedel 06 June 2009

Nice twist at the end.

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