Thursday, March 13, 2008

The Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

She spins me up
Throws me around
Then boosts me up
Never crashes me down
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K. V. Venkataramana 05 April 2008

'Then boosts me up Never crashes me down...' Enjoyed reading every line. Beautiful poem.

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Melissa Masiza 26 March 2008

Great selection of words!

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Coreena Dejesus 24 March 2008

Young love to feel free and seal the night with a kiss under the stars. Very good job Nick! Hugs Coreena

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Ange Eres 13 March 2008

This is a very nice poem! I can connect to it on a personal level so thumbs up!

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