Tuesday, June 29, 2021

The Girl Comments

Rating: 4.2

a girl named Shakira
came to me and said:
I like very much
that you come from Indonesia
...
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Sylvia Frances Chan
COMMENTS
Aarzoo Mehek 30 June 2021

Lets dance to the tune of life. Let's chuck all the inhibition and dance freely.

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Irfanulla Shariff 30 June 2021

Lovely story poem...very well composed. I enjoyed very much reading it.

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M Asim Nehal 30 June 2021

We all are doing dance of this life, aren't we? Nice poem Madam. Shakira returned after a long pause.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 June 2021

What a lovely poem! ! ! Very heartwarming and entertaining. This poem can make you dance with its beautiful flow, simplicity and so mellifluous when read. I love this girl, Shakira! ! To my Poem List..

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Varsha M 29 June 2021

Ahha! Sylvia girls love yo dance especially zumba and belle dance. Will you join. Open invite. Hahaha. Very relaxing poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2021

just wait and see till you see me dance do you dance? she nodded with such a glance

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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