Friday, September 22, 2017

The Giraffe Comments

Rating: 4.9

I am tall,

I am big,
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Biswa Ranjan Nayak
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Ellianna wamsly 03 November 2021

Hi hi hi hi

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cheerleading 25 September 2020

it can be better but it is really really god

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 July 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Biswa Ranjan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Paresh Chakra 23 November 2018

I am tall, I am big, I am, whom You like to see. I like this line

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Biswa and do remain enriched.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 December 2017

In a forest or a zoo.this line is so nice really enjoy your poem biswa10+++++

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Rajendra Rout 03 November 2017

it was a lovely poem and i enjoy your poem.thans for shairing....10++++++++++++++

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Rajendra Rout 31 October 2017

This a Giraffe attempt on your part to excel in the first effort. Thanks Biswa for the nice poem shared...10+++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 28 October 2017

Thanks for your poem10+++-+

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 October 2017

I have four branchesthanks for your line

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 October 2017

From the ground,10+++(((+(

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Paresh Chakra 06 October 2017

I have four branches That touch the ground. I don't eat grass From the ground As others. Thanks Biswa for sailing this poem with us.

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Rajendra Rout 26 September 2017

Wow¡¡¡ what a beauiful poem.your sonnet word is very beautiful.thanks for shairing....10++++

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Anuranjita Ghadei 25 September 2017

I have four branches That touch the ground. I don't eat grass From the ground As others do. Very good puzzle poem, thanks poet. 10

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Anita Aparajita Das 24 September 2017

I am like a Tree of forest I have four branches That touch the ground. I don't eat grass From the ground As others do. A lovely poem for the debut effort. Thanks for it. 10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 September 2017

Great effort on your part to appear funny in your debut attempt. Thanks for sharing it with us. 10 for it.

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

I am like a Tree of forest I have four branches That touch the ground. Thanks for this puzzle poem. This a Giraffe attempt on your part to excel in the first effort. Thanks Biswa for the nice poem shared. 10+

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Rajendra Rout 22 September 2017

I am tall, I am big, I am, whom You like to see. I am like a Tree of forest I have four branches That touch the ground. I don't eat grass From the ground As others do. You see me In a forest or a zoo. Can you tell who am I And what I do? Biswa i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing...10++++

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