The Gift Of Spring (Haiku) Comments
slender green shoot
shoulders aside mass of snow
finds a breath of spring
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The beauty of spring shines through in this Spring Haiku. Vivid imagery painted so well that shows us life awakening to a new season after its hibernation.10
degree by degree tilts the weight of the world to share the gift of spring It's a beautiful spring gift for us fro you too. Lovely poem, amazing. 10++++++ for the sharing.
Thank you, Rini! Always a pleasure to see your comments. Be blessed, good poet (ess) :)
Semis my friend, you have made me finally like haiku, I would never have thought of layering it as you have....pure genius! ! ! It is Poets like you my friend that takes steps beyond the norm..establishing uniqueness! ! ! And the words flow in perfect harmony....I have looked at haiku as math until now, not anymore! ! Awesome! ! ! !
Bill, I cannot tell you how glad I am to hear that my efforts at haiku have affected your opinion of them! I have actually looked upon them as a way of focusing my desire to write when I don't have the time to write a lengthier piece. I just force all my effort into 3 lines, and it seems very doable. Thank you so much for your gracious thoughts!
You have given us a beautiful Gift Of Spring. Images so soothing, wish I could rate it above 10. Going into my poem list.
Thank you, kind poet. I am so glad you enjoyed it! Be blessed, my friend.
Life perceives spring very beautifully. This poem has an amazing imagery within. Unfolding buds of spring is brilliant aspect. This poem is very interesting and excellently penned...10
Thank you, good poet, for your kind words and thoughts. Acts of kindness often cost little, yet give much. I have observed that you are indeed generous with your kindness, sir, and for that I know you will be blessed.
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7/24/2025 10:16:31 PM # 1.0.0
Hey, Neal! This time I notice and appreciate, in the last stanza, tilts the weight of the world—phrasing scientific and lyrical combined. -Glen