Chandan Chatterjee
The Earth, The Moon, The Sun,
The Sea, The River, or The Cloud,
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This poem is almost perfect in my eyes but I don't believe we are made in God's image. God is the universe and this cannot be comprehended.
I will definitely make your poem my favourite if you consider taking out this part, 'Hey father, shower your word of nectar, to enlightenment us'. Your poem is so close to perfection.
Thanks a lot