Wednesday, January 28, 2009

The Gift Comments

Rating: 4.3

'Happy birthday my dear wife,
thank you for coming to my life.'

My heart sang like thruses
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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The whole poem speaks with your grateful and loving heart. If it wasn't a birthday poem it would certainly befit a Valentine poem too. Really beautiful writing. Karin Anderson

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Catrina Heart 28 January 2009

My heart was in euphoria and dwelling in Utopia For I had the best gift once again your endless love that hold us like a chain... beautiful and romantic lines you have...a very especial gift to give to someone very dear...surely her heart will melt if she read this poem...10+++

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