Wednesday, April 21, 2010

The Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time
There lived a man who cared
And on an evening lime
He found a gift and shared
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Leslie Alexis
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Yacov Mitchenko 26 April 2010

You show tighter control here, Leslie. I'm not sure if the 5th stanza is necessary, but aside from that, good job. Yes, sometimes people don't accept gifts because the gifts are so lofty as to make people feel envious or inferior.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 April 2010

Gifted poem Leslie We all are in quest of such fab gift. …forget to look inside Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Lady Grace 22 April 2010

this is a nice piece dear leslie, ..the ideas are well penned...it makes mje glad reading this...very nice, hope the gift is handed to me and i'll promise, it will be forever a treasure...owww...smileeeee

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