Friday, December 29, 2006

.the Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gaze
Into my soul
Gaze
Into my spirit
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Debora Short
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 29 December 2006

IMMANCIPATION COMES TO MIND, HERE...PERHAPS, LINCOLN COULD HAVE USED THIS LITTLE PIECE IN LIEU OF THE GETTYSBURGH, WHICH AS WE BOTH KNOW WAS BUT A MERE 2 MIN. SPEECH, ITSELF! GREAT WORK.(QUIZ, QUIZ, QUIZ) HAPPY NEW YEAR! ~ F.J.R. ~

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Original Unknown Girl 29 December 2006

Debora this is a really beautiful poem, almost a declaration of sorts! Well Done, so evocatively put. HG: -) xx

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