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the ghosts are walking again
walking and talking in the night again
sorrow is eating my bones again
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Wonderful. It's a unique poem...I loved the way you have expressed things... scintillating! !
Being a Vietnam vet I can really relate to this one Susan. Thanks so much.
the ghosts are walking again walking and talking in the night again sorrow is eating my bones again......wonderful poetic expression! This is an amazing poem....5 stars
Savita! ! ! Thank you! ! I favor the use of repetition in some poems to drive it home!
Beautiful heart touching poem. Just when we think that we got a handle on our problems life throws another challenge. I like the repetition of some words....creates such an intense effect.
really it is very poetic and heat touching piece of work, that reminding me with A. Rimbaud's experiences when he wrote: You’ll shut your eyes, not to see, through the glass, Grimacing shadows of evening, Those snarling monsters, a crowd going past Of black wolves and black demons, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10/10 as usual Dear great poet
Really appreciate your thoughtful reading of my poems- -it means everything to me.
This is heart wretching! Survining the pain through mastery over words!
Bravo poet u have crafted a beautiful poem dat is haunting snd lovly at d same time.I enjoyed it
What a beautiful and encouraging comment - thank you from the bottom of my heart, A B
Thank you very much for reading and giving me your reaction to this piece
We must learn to talk with our ghosts, then maybe they will haunt us less, inspire us more.
A well depicted poem on ghosts, night and fear of death has been amazingly shared. The way of presentation is fantastic. The beginning is much attractive. I cite... the ghosts are walking again walking and talking in the night again sorrow is eating my bones again Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for reading and commenting and for giving it a goodly amount of attention
the ghosts are walking again the fog is creeping again the shadows are whispering again.....I am reading these three lines again and again! An amazing piece of poetry!
An awesome display of fine poetic skills. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Susan. Remain enriched.
Chinedu- I am humbled by your comment on this poem. Thank you. When a poet of your quality says such things, I am encouraged to further develop my writing.
Amazing theme.....pulsating poetic expression! A wonderful poem! .......10
Thank you, Dr Dillip Swain... I love your descriptive comment- -] pulsating poetic expression. And I thank you for the 10... I hope it is a pulsating 10! :)
A wonderful piece of poetry! Fascinating rhythm! I may revisit this sensational piece of work again (But I will not walk like them (again) to further increase you apprehension!) ....To MyPoemList
Thank you for liking it enough to put it on your fav list- that is a high compliment, sir. I hope you do revisit
A very sensual write. I think everyone is frightened with this conspiracy. Good job and exemplary.
Such a profound work...........enjoyed it......thanks for sharing......